puzzling.org · mary.gardiner.id.au · Macquarie University

puzzling dot org

 · 

logs

 · 

thoughts

 · 

2008

 · 

October

October 2008

Back in 2001

(It used to be that I couldn't look back seven years. Then I could, but at least it was a different person I saw down there at the wrong end of the telescope. Now, I recall the me of 2001 and in most ways, she was me.

Google has their search index of 2001 up for playing. Crooked Timber is already collecting some fun stuff including searches for housing bubble and subprime mortgage lending. Instead, I would just like to observe that apparently 2008 wasn't looking so exciting back then.

Writing helpful reviews

I outlined the style of good academic reviews to Jonathan in light of our impending OSDC review responsibilities, and it's worth noting here too.

For information's sake, my authority, such as it is, on reviewing comes from being the editorial assistant of Computational Linguistics, which is a journal with a hardworking editor and conscientious reviewers. Not all academic reviews are of the quality I discuss below. They should be.

Begin with stating the title of the paper you are reviewing. Then spend one to three paragraphs summarising its content, particularly what you perceive as its major findings and conclusions.

This has a couple of purposes. The first is that if the reviews have got mixed up in the system the author finds out as soon as possible and doesn't have to slog through a review that (perhaps) is a partial match for their paper and (especially in academic circles) a privacy problem to boot. The second is so that they know in what light to read the rest of the review. If they see that you have understood its fundamentals they will be inclined to take the entire review seriously. If they see you have misunderstood it, they can do one of two things. One is to realise that their paper is confusing, and to make its focus clearer. The other is to discount your review. The decision here may be affected by the following section.

The main body of the review is a discussion of how to improve the paper. Both the tone and discussion will vary considerably depending on certain factors:

  1. is the paper already accepted?
  2. is this the only reviewing round or will you or another reviewer be checking the changes?

For OSDC, both factors hold. For almost all conferences, there is only (at most) one reviewing round for full papers. This makes reviews more limited in scope than journal reviews, where substantial changes are often recommended even (or perhaps especially) to articles the reviewer fundamentally likes. Journal reviewers can have a role which is not far from being anonymous co-authors. (If a colleague did as much re-reading and suggestions of additional work and additional reading as Computational Linguistics reviewers do, many people would consider adding them to the authors list.)

In the event that the article has been accepted, or that this is the single reviewing round, you should limit the scope of your suggestions to much more cosmetic things. Someone who has had an article accepted is just going to be annoyed that you want it to have a whole new body of work incorporated, and they will ignore you. (And if it's rejected after a single reviewing round, they are probably ill-placed to revise much!) In the OSDC scenario, reviewers are going to be mostly limited to suggestions as to how to structure the argument and the paper better, and not really able to productively suggest changes to the argument or the work described in the paper.

As you write your review and this section in particular, keep in mind the key factor of providing useful critiques: how could this work be better on its own terms? That is, don't provide a review that is, fundamentally, about how the paper would have been better if you'd written it... about your pet topic. This is a subtle, tempting and common mistake, and if you have never caught yourself in it, you are likely to be the worst affected. Remember: What is the paper trying to do? How can it do it better? Avoid the temptation to suggest that it would be a better paper if it was doing something different from its current aim. (There is a little more leeway for this in journal reviews, but even in that case, generally what happens if a reviewer thinks this is that they review the article on its current form and recommend a fate suited to its current aims, and additionally comment that they would be interested in seeing further work in the additional direction should the authors choose.)

As a recipient of reviews, I do have a couple of things to add. One is to respect page limits. If you are reviewing for a work with a page limit, especially a conference, and you do really want to see a longer discussion of foo, please suggest which bar could be shortened or cut. Otherwise it is close to impossible for an author to consider your suggestion. Also, if you are making suggestions for future work that you think the authors should consider but which you do not actually want to see in the article, make this clear in the text of your review. I would probably recommend a whole separate section for this if you're going to do it.

A review may conclude with a list of typos, spelling mistakes, suggested rephrasings, etc. Mistakes that affect the reading of the paper (eg mislabeled figures and sections) go right at the start of this list. A sufficiently ill-proofread paper may go back with a suggestion that the authors find the mistakes themselves.

linux.conf.au 2009 programme

The programme for linux.conf.au 2009 has been announced. I was chair of the committee that selected the talks, and you can see how seriously I took my duties (evidently I did nothing but look slightly grouchy and earnest all day).

Some talks I am especially looking forward to are:

Internet filtering proposal

Via Stewart Smith, a Computerworld article stating that:

Australians will be unable to opt-out of the government's pending Internet content filtering scheme, and will instead be placed on a watered-down blacklist, experts say.

Under the government's $125.8 million Plan for Cyber-Safety, users can switch between two blacklists which block content inappropriate for children, and a separate list which blocks illegal material.

Pundits say consumers have been lulled into believing the opt-out proviso would remove content filtering altogether.

Possible objections to this include but are not limited to:

  • general advisability of universal access to information;
  • optional filtering software already being commercially available to those who want it;
  • likelihood of universal filtering restricting activities of researchers and professional workers who need knowledge of illegal activities;
  • likelihood of universal filtering blocking access to legal information about (among other things) sexual issues and drugs;
  • likelihood of blocked material being expanded to include other things commonly not approved of by governments (criticism, activism, protest) and by people who most want a filtered Internet (pre-marital and extra-marital sex, religious and anti-religious material);
  • affect on Internet access speeds;
  • the need to identify oneself to some authority as someone willing to view adult-only material in order to be exempted from the larger blacklist;
  • low precision and recall of automatic blacklists (that is, they both block things they shouldn't and don't block things they should) and low recall of manual blacklists (they don't block things they should).

Assuming you deeply dislike this proposal, you might want to discuss why you dislike it in the letters you are right now sitting down to write to Senator the Hon Stephen Conroy, Minister for Broadband, Communications and the Digital Economy and Senator the Hon Nick Minchin, Shadow Minister for Broadband, Communications and the Digital Economy.

Then you can move to New Zealand, where copyright takedowns are required regardless of proof of copyright violation.

Irritating news coverage: autism

I am getting fed up with science journalism, and so here I am, bound and determined to make you annoyed too. First, a general introduction to things that annoy me:

  1. reporting the results of a self-selected survey as a population-wide finding (if you survey readers of Australian Top Gear and furthermore describe it as a manliness survey — unless that was the journalist — about how much they feel about their female partners' driving skills, it's going to be news if it doesn't come up as women drivers suck, not if it does)
  2. when reporting on medical results, not reporting on exactly which population was studied

There's more subtle examples that don't annoy me so much because you have to have a bit of knowledge of the science in question to get underneath them. For example, studies where a bunch of sick people and a bunch of healthy people are studied and asked questions like do you eat eggs? and the result is reported as either being sick is correlated with eating eggs or (more usually) study links eating eggs to cancer! are difficult to interpret because people who know they are sick tend to over-report (or alternatively healthy people under-report, or possibly both) anything that they think of as a risk factor. Because they too are looking for an explanation of why they're sick.

Anyway, today's example is from door number two:

In about 70 per cent of the kids, we're seeing that if they're not responding to their name at 12 months, they've gone on to receive a diagnosis of autism, [Associate Professor Robin Young of Flinders University] said.

New test to detect autism in babies

A very important question follows. Was that:

  • 70% of a sample of children who have been diagnosed as autistic didn't respond to their name at twelve months; or
  • 70% of a random sample of children who didn't respond to their name at twelve months went to on receive a diagnosis of autism?

The difference is pretty important: the second is much more concerning to parents of children who aren't responding to their name than the first one is. (To illustrate the difference, consider the statements 99% of women aren't blonde compared to 99% of people who aren't blond(e) are women in terms of the kinds of predictions you're making when you're told someone has dark hair.)

I don't know if Associate Professor Young gave a sloppy quote here, was misquoted or whether a sloppy quote was selected from a more informative interview/statement/press release.

PSA: linux.conf.au domain

Apparently the linux.conf.au domain is dead and might be for a little while. Steve Walsh writes:

Subject: Re: [Linux-aus] linux.conf.au dead?

> whois linux.conf.au
> No Data Found

The admin team noticed this about 11am this morning and notified the
registrar of the domain, who appears to have expired the domain out of
their system. We're working on getting it back into the system ASAP.

Meanwhile, http://marchsouth.org and https://conf.linux.org.au are still
up and serving conf-y goodness.

Last modified: 19 October 2008